on A cold shiver raced up my spine as I saw a dark figure lurking around the room. I was sitting on my couch and as I looked around for the figure the couch made a POOF noise and it was gone! My mum came out and I told her everything about what just happened. “But where did it go?” she shouted. It all went very quickly I told myself in my head and it’s all over now. But my heart was still pounding in my body and into my head and then I realised what happened oh no I thought.
on As I woke up a cold shiver raced up the back of my spine and I got the goosebumps all over. As I wondered where I was I heard a deep mysterious voice and with a flicker the light was on and I was in a room all locked up. I must be in jail I thought as a man said “your correct there buddy.” As I tried to think why I was locked up in jail I remembered why. Seriously i thought to myself I’m seriously in jail because I stole one dollar from the bank. So I took a step and realised that I had a ball and chain on my foot it was heavier than I expected.
on My Exhibition topic is Sporting Crowd Behaviour so this story is about an AFL match. We also had to include these five words:
Bicycle
Yellow
Desperate
Greedily
Warned
These words are going to be in bold in my story so you know that I have included all of them in my story.
The crowd cheered loudly as Richmond dropped an easy mark and the yellow, Sherrin football soared through Port Adelaides goals. Everyone was happy except for the Richmond supporters who warned the power supporters to back off. “OK” they said but when the power got another goal the Richmond supporters were not happy so they greedily started to tell them to back off until they pushed the port supporters in the back and they started to fight and suddenly the fi al siren sounded so they stopped the fight with the help of the security guards so desperate and eager to keep going the rode their bicycles home.
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Today we had to write an 100 word challenge and this was mine:
As I was walking down the street I was astounded of what I saw outside my favourite shop in town. There was two tall statues of men. One tall and handsome with slicked back hair and the other one a bit larger in size and with ruffled curls at the end of his slick hairstyle like the other one. She ran home to find out that her parents weren’t there because they were still at work so she ran back to town and checked out the statues and to her surprise there was lots of other people there taking pictures with the statues so she copied.